wolverine/rogue fic help

[crankylex]

Okay, W/R peeps, I need help.

I have this WIP (which is actually the sequel to another WIP, but that's neither here nor there) lurking around. I've written about fifteen pages worth, and I really like what I've got, but the problem is I have no point.

(That happens to me frequently.)

I seem to have no goal.

(That also happens frequently.)

Anyone willing to look it over and see if anything pops out as the beginning of a point or something?

Comments

[jaq-of-spades.livejournal.com]

Normally I'd jump at the chance but I've got 10 days and counting til my exams. And about 53 papers to take notes from ... but if you're still looking for someone after November 13, count me in!

[spikesleman.livejournal.com]

I would but I'm not up to speed on the fandom. Heck, I barely even know who the characters are.

If you want the opinion of someone who starts out pretty much clueless, I'll volunteer.

I'll also understand if you think, "Puh-leeeeze, wench. No way."

[crankylex.livejournal.com]

Babe, it's waited for months. Another two weeks won't make a difference.

YAY!

Just lemme know when you're ready.

:-)

[crankylex.livejournal.com]

I'm going to wait until I have it more fleshed out. I'd rather have a non-fan's opinion of the thing as a whole, to see if it flows for the casual observer.

Thanks!